Thursday, October 29, 2020

HALLOWEENSIE

I have written two Halloween rhymes for your amusement. I am rising to a challenge posted on Susanna Leonard Hill's website  (Halloweensie Contest) to write a story for children that is under a 100 words. It must include some form of the words "skeleton", "mask" and "creep". I wrote two. Hope you enjoy.

TRICK? OR TREAT?

by Ginny Neil

Grab your mask. Let’s trick-or-treat,
down this creepy, spooky street.
We’ll ask for something good to eat,
at the witch’s door.
 
She’ll open it and offer things,
like crispy, crunchy bug wing-dings,   
or battered deep-fried fruit-bat wings.
We’ll smile and ask for more.
 
We’ll sample sun-dried bison chips,
or maybe chewy hippo lips
dipped in pureed python hips,
or snack on slug fillet.
 
We’ll be polite, won’t eat and run.
She’ll serve dessert when we are done.
Some crunchy, sugared skeleton,
or toad with warts flambé.
 
Then, we’ll decide.
What did we eat?
A gory trick
or gourmet treat?


THE ELETONKS

by Ginny Neil

A skeleton’s job on Halloween night

is making kids scream with terrible fright.

But this Halloween, poor skeleton stumbled, 

as he crept down the hill, getting totally jumbled.

Now, eletonks’ bones are all out of place.

A mask full of tarsals makes up his face.

His femurs are feet. His skull’s near his knee.

His spine’s tangled up where his left arm should be.

His fidgety fingers hang down from his thighs,

and two broken ribs poke out of his eyes.

So, giggle at eletonks. Trust me you’d tremble

if skeleton’s bones could just

reassemble.


10 comments:

  1. I think I'll pass on all those "treats"! Lol. Super cute!

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  2. Eletonks! Took me a minute to "get" it. LOL Very clever!

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  3. Both stories are fun! Love the ending line of Trick? Or Treat? and the jumbled-up skeleton, too!

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  4. Doubly good, Ginny! Both stories are so creative! Best of luck in the contest.

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  5. I love your stories. They made me smile. Good luck!

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  6. Oh, the second is quite funny. And the rhyme scheme and meter of the first is spot on! It's clear you had fun writing these. Good luck!

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  7. Both are clever in such different ways. Nice job on double the creativity!

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  8. Both are so well done and creative. Wonderful job!

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  9. I like them! The second is my favorite of the two but they are both clever and cute.

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  10. I like them both, but the second definitely made me laugh out loud!

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